Post by StarF on Jan 10, 2011 7:42:10 GMT -5
Hey everyone! Been awhile. ^_^
So I finally made the last song on the album I've been working on for quite some time, been trying to find the inspiration, and I found it in the battle with Giygas on Earthbound (If you don't know, Youtube it, crazy stuff)... It was just what I needed to get in the mood to write and record this song, which will serve as the ending to my most recent endeavor, Empty Handed.
I would love feedback. Keep in mind this is a demo, so I'll probably chance stuff around, and it still needs to be mixed, but a preliminary thought session would benefit greatly. Thanks! ^_^
soundcloud.com/starfraps/its-not-right-demo
LYRICS:
(And I feel terrible...)
I'd really like to kill myself!
Did I say "kill"!? I meant THANK.
For the poison I drank that left my memory blank
It robbed the memory bank, and I can't feel anymore
It cut through the skin and bone right down into my core
I hit the floor (I hit the floor, I hit the floor)
I can't STOP.
I feel it seeping further in my veins I'm gonna drop
And I'm falling (falling) and I can't get away
From all the horrible things that I have forgotten to say
And I feel terrible, and I feel terrible
And I feel terrible terrible (It's getting unbearable)
So this goes out to the world, especially those filled with hate
I'm going to self-destruct and you're all gonna feel great!
(And I feel terrible...)
I'd really like to curse myself!
Did I say "curse"!? I meant EXALT
The more I think about it the more I realize I'm at fault
I filled all the wounds with salt, and now I feel all too much
The more I amputate my limbs the more that I'm out of touch
And I can no longer bear to use you as my crutch
I'm out of luck (out of luck, out of luck)
I can't MOVE.
The splitting of the paths made it too hard to choose
And I can no longer see what it is that I have to lose
And I'm so terrible, and I'm so terrible
And I'm so terrible terrible (Now it's unrepairable)
We can revel in my ashes as I rise and take form
I am I am I am I am I am the eye of the storm
(And I feel terrible...)
So I finally made the last song on the album I've been working on for quite some time, been trying to find the inspiration, and I found it in the battle with Giygas on Earthbound (If you don't know, Youtube it, crazy stuff)... It was just what I needed to get in the mood to write and record this song, which will serve as the ending to my most recent endeavor, Empty Handed.
I would love feedback. Keep in mind this is a demo, so I'll probably chance stuff around, and it still needs to be mixed, but a preliminary thought session would benefit greatly. Thanks! ^_^
soundcloud.com/starfraps/its-not-right-demo
LYRICS:
(And I feel terrible...)
I'd really like to kill myself!
Did I say "kill"!? I meant THANK.
For the poison I drank that left my memory blank
It robbed the memory bank, and I can't feel anymore
It cut through the skin and bone right down into my core
I hit the floor (I hit the floor, I hit the floor)
I can't STOP.
I feel it seeping further in my veins I'm gonna drop
And I'm falling (falling) and I can't get away
From all the horrible things that I have forgotten to say
And I feel terrible, and I feel terrible
And I feel terrible terrible (It's getting unbearable)
So this goes out to the world, especially those filled with hate
I'm going to self-destruct and you're all gonna feel great!
(And I feel terrible...)
I'd really like to curse myself!
Did I say "curse"!? I meant EXALT
The more I think about it the more I realize I'm at fault
I filled all the wounds with salt, and now I feel all too much
The more I amputate my limbs the more that I'm out of touch
And I can no longer bear to use you as my crutch
I'm out of luck (out of luck, out of luck)
I can't MOVE.
The splitting of the paths made it too hard to choose
And I can no longer see what it is that I have to lose
And I'm so terrible, and I'm so terrible
And I'm so terrible terrible (Now it's unrepairable)
We can revel in my ashes as I rise and take form
I am I am I am I am I am the eye of the storm
(And I feel terrible...)
