Post by mashuga31 on May 18, 2010 23:30:29 GMT -5
From yours truly!
[WARNING: READING THIS POEM MAY CAUSE YOU TO BE DEPRESSED]
I wanted to share this one with the tribe before I put it on my blog. Yeah!
Promised Denial
And when there is blood,
There will be no pain,
The faithful retract,
From a faithless flame,
Twelve shots for one,
In a mesmerizing trance,
The frail mind will suffer,
From the death of romance,
Beyond me I lie,
In a devastating array,
of dead hope and blindness,
In a pale black boquet,
For when i am gone,
There will be no pain,
For the love that was lost,
Left me covered in shame...
Tell me what you guys thinked!
[WARNING: READING THIS POEM MAY CAUSE YOU TO BE DEPRESSED]
I wanted to share this one with the tribe before I put it on my blog. Yeah!
Promised Denial
And when there is blood,
There will be no pain,
The faithful retract,
From a faithless flame,
Twelve shots for one,
In a mesmerizing trance,
The frail mind will suffer,
From the death of romance,
Beyond me I lie,
In a devastating array,
of dead hope and blindness,
In a pale black boquet,
For when i am gone,
There will be no pain,
For the love that was lost,
Left me covered in shame...
Tell me what you guys thinked!
