I was bored so I did this.

[shinigami345]

A certian uncertianty filled my heart
just as my world began to fall apart.
Peradventure, I go back to the start
then I would lose my culinary art.

My culinary art was amazing
then you took it away like a fire blazing.
You were just envious of my glazing
you started my iron curtain rising.

My iron curtian was like a tin wall
you tore through it at the masquerade ball.
I wore a mask ,and you wore a sage shawl
we got home ,and --for me-- you bore it all.

After that night, I still look back; betwixt us
you're my beautiful damsel in distress.

What do you guys think of it? It's like a sonnet or something. Written entirely in Iambic Pentameter(what Shakespeare used).

[earth]

thats good i can rhyme and make poems and raps but iambic pentameter is freakin hard for me. once i get started i can continue. but its hard to start. good job!... though its kinda random... haha

[shinigami345]

www.rhymezone.com/?loc=bar That's where I get my poetry steroids. I tried to make it not random, but for the most part it seemed to transition well. Culinary art ends the first quatraine and begins the second that type of thing.

[mashuga31]

I like it *Ultra thumbs up in RL*

[shinigami345]

As the radiant moon turns sanguine, I masticate my tangerine,
and still I imput data into my old Von Neumann machine.
The crimson rain began; it was upon me like a submarine
seemingly out of nowhere it transformed into a deep sanguine.

As I finished, almost diminished; my tangerine and typing
there came a bombardment at my bedroom door. Thus, I walked gently swiping
towards my bedroom door. Thither I found a flaming moltres, piping.
The moltres came and ate; we talked about the external hyping.

The moltres spread its wings and the sanguine colors left us in peace,
I mounted the moltres and we flew to the capital of greece.
Moltes was confiscated by the Royal Greek Mounted Police.
It rose up and smote the royal police and we left for the Suisse.

We arrived in Suisse and lamented for the smitten police,
Moltres said, "sorry"; we gained politcal assylum in Suisse.

Sorry about the pokemon, I was dared I couldn't incorporate pokemon into an Iambic Octameter poem and I proved them wrong

[bathanie]

Not bad.. not bad at all. (:

[Kevak]

there is a poetry thread already

if you could go post there?

[MusicIsMyLife4Eva89]

I loved it! I can't write poetry worth crap, so props to you!