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Post by thenameless on Apr 3, 2010 21:44:53 GMT -5
I tell you, the people of the south pole, I have made it my everlasting goal, To make you all rhyme, in whole, Using but time and soul!
A poem I ask of you, even if it is only a few, so even when I ask, on cue, you shall open your color and hue!
So i ask you, to reply with some lines, words and rhymes of all kinds! Give me your faithful signs, and show me, how the word shines.
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Post by zAkAtAk on Apr 3, 2010 21:47:51 GMT -5
My favorite color is orange. I go out at night and buy a whore......ange. We do it all night, in the car.........ange. My favorite color is orange.
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Post by Ryan on Apr 3, 2010 22:15:47 GMT -5
zak is silly, don't listen to him he decided to rhyme with orange on a whim but that's ok, at least so I think for at least it was funny, and didn't stink
to respond to you, in earnest rhyme is bound to take up, a good deal of time but at least again, I find it fun and so I continue a rhyme like this one
But I might ask, what prompted this? this whisk of a whim, to rhyme with bliss surely there must be reason in rhyme why this, why now, why in this time?
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Post by kevinguy247 on Apr 3, 2010 22:31:22 GMT -5
Tyme, don't you know what the bible has done? Said there's a time for all things that are under the sun! In time you will realize, Tyme, this is the day That we should all rhyme all our troubles away!
I think you are brilliant, Thenameless, so quick! To indulge in this quirky and fun little trick Of all of the things on the moon maybe more I haven't seen many things this fun before!
And so I applaud you, you fine sir, my friend For creating the means for a rhyme with no end. A simple and grand way to be creative Is just the right thing for a great mind to give!
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Post by Ryan on Apr 3, 2010 22:41:18 GMT -5
I did not say this was a poor thought I simply asked why, that is all that I sought It's fun, that it is, to rhyme all day and so I will rhyme my troubles away
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Post by Johncoyne on Apr 3, 2010 22:49:59 GMT -5
Cat. Bat. Mat. Sat.
That's about as much rhyming as I can handle.
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Post by kevinguy247 on Apr 3, 2010 22:54:16 GMT -5
I'm glad that we can have common ground, you and I about the merits of rhythm and rhyme And as for conjoin I am surprised at best A musician so capable can't pass this test!
But I suppose that's what lyricists were made for So musicians can compose their elegant scores And not have to worry about trifling words For to spread yourself too thin is simply absurd
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Post by zAkAtAk on Apr 3, 2010 22:56:29 GMT -5
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Post by Johncoyne on Apr 3, 2010 22:57:14 GMT -5
I was merely joking, kevinguy, In fact, I can rhyme on the fly. When it comes to rhyming, I'm rather sly, yet I've never written any lyrics, kevinguy.
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Post by kevinguy247 on Apr 3, 2010 23:13:44 GMT -5
Is that true? It's hard to conceive Are you really saying I ought to believe You have this great talent for verse and meter But never used it to make your music sweeter? I foresee a project from this revelation For each of us to utilize our stations For, coupled with poetry I love to sing Of all of my talents it must be first string. I'm getting a new microphone in the mail And soon as I do I'll tell you, my new pal Have you ever heard of the Shures? They're a band! I would love to do something like what they planned They've accomplished quite an impressive feat For though they make music that's far from discrete One is American, One British, One Aussie They created through their webcams, you see And they did all this when they'd never met! Save over this great internet! I propose you and I do the same And perhaps grab some more musicians for this game Tell me what you think and we'll start it real soon! Heck, this is why we have south pole of the moon I hope you agree that this could be quite grand So until then I'll wait for your command
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Post by Johncoyne on Apr 3, 2010 23:19:46 GMT -5
Kevinguy, you're cool. Too cool for school. In a pool. In the Jungle of Nool.
Your idea is great. Thank the Fates-- that you state-- your idea, which is great.
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Post by alwaysthinking on Apr 3, 2010 23:53:22 GMT -5
I'm a poet and I didn't even know that I was. (See what I did there?)
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Post by Ryan on Apr 3, 2010 23:54:01 GMT -5
I would love to join, in this project so grand that kevinguy and conjoin have so thought of and planned I dabble in music, rhyme and rhythm but lyrics have always seemed like mysticism I do not know how to write them well, for along with a meter, their meaning must tell of a story important, or moral worth telling for only then are lyrics worth dwelling
have either of you heard of a band? relient K the name, and their songs I find grand but the reason I find that their songs are so great is the morals within that they so slyly state
Though many may find that religious they be, their best songs are not religious you'll see, but because of this genre, I often do find that their lyrics put thoughts right into my mind
so if you should make, music with this a gift so amazing as rhyming with bliss then I ask of you to put meaning in words as you write them for others in musical thirds
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Post by kevinguy247 on Apr 4, 2010 0:02:55 GMT -5
Tyme I agree that in lyrics you should Find a way to to say something that's good That people can walk away and say "wow" Cuz they've really been moved by the piece's real power
I think help would be great in this pogo crusade! No matter how much music you've ever played. I'm really excited right now, can you tell? This is my first project, I hope it goes well!
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Post by thenameless on Apr 4, 2010 22:39:40 GMT -5
This is why, I have brought us together In this simple thread by the beach, or in bad weather, we should never keep rhyme in our head!
Your project you see, has potential to be, as great as the ebb and flow of the sea! And the simple idea of it, quite pleases me!
so I beg you my mate, keep me up to date, for my search of knowledge is hard to satiate.
And I'd sure love to aid, without being paid, with my whimsical blade, from rhyme and reason i've made!
So I'd sure love to do, this project with you, and start it anew, without even having a clue!
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Post by Joey on Apr 4, 2010 22:41:16 GMT -5
I Like Pie...Bye
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