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Post by spitfyre32x on Sept 13, 2010 21:12:35 GMT -5
www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZpyGJLWAuswww.youtube.com/watch?v=4iS9E8QlAr4and www.youtube.com/watch?v=8tOAB_WUr_gBased on these 3 videos, I was going to attempt to make a single segment 10 minute video, or a 3 segment video, each segment about 15 minutes. I have some ideas, but if you have some, I'd love to hear about them. Rules of thumb: 1. It takes place 10 years after the third one 2. JIMMY IS DEAD 3. LITTLE FRIEND IS DEAD 4. Remember, he's INSANE. 5. No, he never went to jail for the killings 6. He's married. No children though. 7. Not a wife beater That about covers it. O.k.! Any ideas for my screenplay, please let me know! And yes, the video will be significantly better, more focused, and darker. Not comedy, but drama. Good luck! ~Spitfyre32x
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Post by Rogers91 on Sept 13, 2010 22:07:00 GMT -5
well i need answers before i can help any... was jimmy the big boss or just a second tier local gange runner? where any of the clients the hitman killed protected by any other gangs? is his wife loyal? do the police have a warent out for his arrest? where any of the people he killed family members seeking revenge afterwards? are you going to kill off the hitman or leave it open so you can continue the story line if you so choose? does the hitman have a name or is he going to be annonymous? does the hitman stick with his original weapon of choice and method of execution? does the hitman have any friends that will help him along the way?
i have lots more questions but the point is you should keep in kind that this is what your audience will be thinking about as they watch it. make sure to develop a very stronge back stoy even if none of it comes into play haveing a history on each character will give you more to work with and in turn make your characters much more deep and intense...
ohh well you know how to contact me so good luck.
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Post by spitfyre32x on Sept 13, 2010 22:13:51 GMT -5
Jimmy was the boss of his branch of the mafia No Yes Not sure. Maybe not because he killed Jimmy ...what? I'll probably leave him alive, but not continue it. Zack He's skilled with melee weapons, and the pvc tommy gun he uses. Maybe
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